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Writing Killer Conversion Copy: Getting Past the Bouncers in Your Brain

Conversion-Centered Design

Why do we have to work so hard to get our persuasive messages heard? Why is direct response copywriting so difficult? Why don’t people read?

This presentation from ConversionSUMMIT 2013 and ConversionJAM 3 introduces you to two “bouncers” in the human brain that keep marketing messages from penetrating and tells you what to do about them.

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Brian Massey at Conversion SUMMIT

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Brian Massey
Brian Massey
Conversion Scientist™ at Conversion Sciences
Brian Massey is the Founder and Conversion Scientist™ at Conversion Sciences, a sought-after international speaker, and author of Your Customer Creation Equation. He is passionate about transforming websites through a steady diet of visitor profiling, purposeful content, analytics, and AB testing.

Expertise: conversion rate optimization, AB testing, marketing strategy, digital marketing, analytics, landing page design, computer programming, entrepreneurship

Speaking: IBM, Inbound, LeadsCon, Content Marketing World, Affiliate Summit, and more

Books and Training: Your Conversion Creation Equation, Video CRO, Marketing Videos that Convert, CRO Best Practices

As Seen On: ClickZ, Search Engine Land, Marketing Land, Conversion Sciences Blog, Intended Consequences podcast

Education: Texas A&M University, BS Computer Science and Management
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10 replies
  1. Lewis LaLanne - NoteTakingNerd
    Lewis LaLanne - NoteTakingNerd says:
    September 18, 2013 at 7:29 pm

    I think Nike should use slide #3’s scientific selling argument of “lowers the average wearer’s Crotch Heat Index (CHI) reading by up to 22%” to sell their “Drifit” athletic lines of clothing.
    No one wants to be the one leaving excessive moisture on the equipment at the gym. :)

    • Brian Massey
      Brian Massey says:
      September 18, 2013 at 10:08 pm

      They could do a study to calculate the MDI (moisture depository index) of their clothing.

  2. Ashley
    Ashley says:
    December 19, 2016 at 2:11 pm

    Is the slideshow presentation supposed to have audio?

    • Brian Massey
      Brian Massey says:
      December 19, 2016 at 2:25 pm

      Ashley,
      I’ve added the video of the presentation and you can follow along using the slides. Thanks for improving this article!
      Brian

      • Ashley
        Ashley says:
        December 19, 2016 at 9:15 pm

        Thanks for the quick reply! I will watch the video tomorrow morning. :)

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