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Critiquing a College Break Landing Page with CrazyEgg

Landing Page Optimization

It’s graduation time and you know what that means; summer vacation! This is the perfect time for students to travel before getting back to school next semester or starting their careers. The big, bouncy brains over at CrazyEgg did a search for “best graduation getaway” and came up with this landing page to critique.

college getaway landing page

What do you think?


Brian is among the four conversion experts that were asked to give their thoughts on the good points of this page as well as the areas that could use improvement. What did he have to say? Well I won’t give it all away, but I will tell you this; college kids are lazy, and hassle-free is an attractive promise.
For Brian’s thoughts on this landing page, as well as the other three experts, check out the entire article on CrazyEgg.
Thanks to CrazyEgg for inviting Brian to be a part of this post!

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May 15, 2013/by Cathy Tilton
14 replies
  1. Kathryn Aragon
    Kathryn Aragon says:
    May 15, 2013 at 9:10 am

    Your welcome! And thanks to Brian for his analysis. His comments were spot on.

  2. tim
    tim says:
    May 20, 2013 at 1:10 pm

    http://www.test.co.uk

  3. tim
    tim says:
    May 20, 2013 at 1:11 pm

    http://www.test.co.uk

  4. tim
    tim says:
    May 20, 2013 at 1:14 pm

    http://www.test.co.uk

  5. tim
    tim says:
    May 20, 2013 at 1:17 pm

    http://www.test.co.uk

  6. tim
    tim says:
    May 20, 2013 at 1:17 pm

    <ahttp://www.test.co.uk

  7. tim
    tim says:
    May 20, 2013 at 1:17 pm

    <<>div style=”height:1px;width:1px”>http://www.test.co.uk

  8. tim
    tim says:
    May 20, 2013 at 1:18 pm

    http://www.test.co.uk

  9. tim
    tim says:
    May 20, 2013 at 1:20 pm

    <pstyle=”padding:10px”>http://www.test.co.uk

  10. tim
    tim says:
    May 20, 2013 at 1:21 pm

    <p style=”padding:10px”>http://www.test.co.uk

  11. tim
    tim says:
    May 20, 2013 at 1:27 pm

    http://www.test.co.uk

  12. tim
    tim says:
    May 20, 2013 at 1:50 pm

    +ADw-b style+AD0AIg-padding:10px+ACIAPgA8-a title+AD0AIg-goobye+ACIAPg-www.test.co.uk+ADw-/a+AD4APA-/b+AD4-

  13. tim
    tim says:
    May 20, 2013 at 1:51 pm

    hello +ADw- hows it

  14. tim
    tim says:
    May 20, 2013 at 1:53 pm

    http://www.test.co.uk

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